If you were to write another chapter about that gal, I'd read it. I want to hear her story. You're writing a bit like Raymond Chandler or Dashiell Hammett but with humor. It fits you well.
Adroit is a French word, which means "to the right" mid 17th century: from French, from à droit ‘according to right, properly’. "A gauche" means "to the left" . When a person is gauche they are a boor like me, socially awkward.
If you were to write another chapter about that gal, I'd read it. I want to hear her story. You're writing a bit like Raymond Chandler or Dashiell Hammett but with humor. It fits you well.
Adroit is a French word, which means "to the right" mid 17th century: from French, from à droit ‘according to right, properly’. "A gauche" means "to the left" . When a person is gauche they are a boor like me, socially awkward.
How about using "turgid" without following it with "member"? Or "eschew"? Nice story fragment, by the way. Very 1950s noir.
Love this one..Funny, sad and happy all in one!
Love this - Very adroit!