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So far, I've been drawn in by the tension between love and violence, warmth and cold, you don't exactly know what's happening yet, but the poetic prose and rhythm has me hooked.

The scene where Paps has the kids dance was especially intense: "When we got home from school, Paps crowded the kitchen, cooking and listening to music and feeling fine. He whiffed the steam coming off a pot, then clapped his hands together and rubbed them briskly. His eyes were wet and sparkled with giddy life. He turned up the volume on the stereo and it was mambo, it was Tito Puente."

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It sets up the unquenchable thirst that permeates their lives, "frightened and vengeful- little animals clawing at what (they) needed"- It also establishes the poetic tone with which the author describes so many un-poetic juxtaposed clamoring realities. He uses unrequited need and unrelenting noise repeatedly, like an uncomfortable drum from which the moments of quiet provide a welcome, though often sad and seemingly defeated, respite. The narrative style is honest and original and consistent, as is the story. Great recommendation.

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